You definitely want to pick up a copy of
Angel of Glory's Rise for a humans tribal.
I feel like you have enough legendary targets that
Thalia's Lancers might be worth consideration. You do have some hurt on card advantage so even just tutoring for
The One Ring might be enough but it can get other things as well.
Grasp of Fate - in my opinion its a tempo removal card. I say this just because I don't think this deck is fast enough for this to really feel that amazing. I was thinking that something more like
Excise the Imperfect might fit the list better just because if the game doesn't end somewhat quickly after I think Grasp can be somewhat of a liability. It depends on how much you are targeting commanders though and how your opponents are reacting but my take on Grasp tends to be that its a liability if its plan is being an answer for more than a turn and for that I tend to prefer it in a fast winning tempo style of deck.
Revoke Existence - Who hurt you? This is so far down my removal tier list I just have to assume you have a metric ton of
The One Ring running about your meta or someone is literally playing gods.deck. The fact that you have this card in your list but not
Heliod's Intervention to me says that either you are over reacting or there is a problem locally.
Sevinne's Reclamation - I do actually like this card but given your deck's composition I feel like your concern should be more towards someone sweeping than removing one or two of your creatures. I would personally suggest
Marshal's Anthem or
Ascend from Avernus instead. My own take on recovery tools is you should assume with a deck like this that the real problem will be someone taking multiple of your creatures out in one shot via a sweeper rather than one at a time via spot removal.
30 Land might also be a little low. You don't have that low of a curve and you don't have that many mana stones. I would probably consider bumping that up by at least a few but I would have a hard time being convinced that less than 35 is optimal without adding a lot more mana rocks or cutting the curve to be a lot leaner. I think it might also be worth talking about the fetchlands in the mono color deck. I have been there and done it myself but its usually because I have additional interaction like
Crucible of Worlds,
Rings of Brighthearth,
Field of the Dead or something. I don't know that they are really worth doing without something extra. I also think your basic count is a little low for
Emeria, the Sky Ruin but not so low that it will never trigger mostly probably thanks to
Sword of the Animist being in your list.
Personally I think your Ranger one drop package runs a little too deep. One drops in a go wide mono color deck like this can be a little rough on what all they do when drawn naturally. You currently have 9 one drops and normally with a ranger package you can sort of identify a few different scenarios where you tutor differently with them. My suggestion is to figure out those tutor priorities and cut the ones that you essentially don't plan to tutor. Personally I would probably cut that one drop count like in half just because card advantage is going to be a problem for you and sweepers are also really rough on one drops.
I also agree that
Solitude feels really odd here. You don't really have any synergy for it and this is a deck where you are going to have problems with card advantage already.
