Sacred Flame Convocation 4W
Instant (C)
Toil (This spell costs 1 less to cast for each creature you control that had a non-mana ability activated or triggered this turn.)
Exile target creature. You gain life equal to its toughness.

Talespinner Siren 1B
Creature — Siren (C)
Flying
Escape—3B, Exile four other cards from your graveyard. (You may cast this card from your graveyard for its escape cost.)
When Talespinner Siren escapes, you may return target enchantment card from your graveyard to your hand.
1/2

Haunted Basilica
Land (C)
Haunted Basilica enters the battlefield tapped.
T: Add or .
2WB, T, Sacrifice Haunted Basilica: Create a 2/2 white and black Spirit creature token with lifelink.

kwanyeegor-ii: I like the mercenary mechanics you made here. Doesn't feel meaningfully Suq'ata. Ryder: This card is cool but I don't really foresee a return of flanking in modern-day MTG. Subject16: Interesting use of phasing. I'm not sure this needs to be a mythic; could be rare. RaikouRider: This...

Henlock: This has a lot of typos! I like the sacrifice ability a lot. slimytrout: I feel like the first ability here is almost a blank, which is disappointing, and the 'simulated alpha artifact' text is awkward. bravelion83: This is an interesting take on black draw. RaikouRider: I'm kind of into t...

Integrated Manufactory 2G
Enchantment — Aura (C)
Enchant land
Whenever enchanted land becomes tapped, put a charge counter on it.
Remove a charge counter from enchanted land: Add C.
When we learned to work with the land instead of against it, we unlocked wonders.

Tambika, Femeref Sun Priest 3W Legendary Creature — Human Cleric (R) Whenever you cast a creature or enchantment spell, create a 1/1 white Spirit creature token with flying. As long as you control at least three Spirits, creatures you control have lifelink. "Let us return where our souls resid...

Twitching Baloth 3GG
Creature — Beast (C)
Haste
When Twitching Baloth dies, you may have it deal damage equal to its power to target creature.
"When it goes down, watch for the jaws! They keep on biting."
4/4

Phyrexian Incubator 4
Artifact (R)
2, T: Tap target nonartifact creature and put a +1/+1 counter on it. It becomes an artifact in addition to its other types.

iiw planechase

Sorry, I was on vacation! Critiques incoming. And done! bravelion83: I'm a bit leery of cards that require CR changes but, ok. slimytrout: There must be something clever about this that I'm missing. Ryder: I can't imagine this being printed. Adventure and cascade together is a really high degree of ...

Surging Fluxmage 3UR
Creature — Human Wizard (R)
Cascade
When Surging Fluxmage enters the battlefield, it deals X damage to target player or planeswalker, where X is the number of instant and sorcery cards in your graveyard.
2/2

Is there any compelling reason to use 'loses crew' over 'loses all abilities'?

My suggestion here is to go back to Phoenix identity (fast, lightweight attackers that can recur themselves) and rework these cards within that identity, and beyond that, when you're creating a cycle, don't make the same card and post it five times.

Double Strike r Sorcery (C) Double Strike deals 3 damage to any target that was dealt damage this turn. "Who says lightning never strikes the same place twice?" I find the flavor of this weak (the FT is repetitive with other FTs cards have had and the cardname is the name of a keyword tha...

Yeah, I'm talking about edit 2. Ghoulraiser is the more recent wording precedent for such effects.

Hey [mention]bravelion83[/mention], Ghoulraiser

I think the core idea of "make cards that explicitly benefit when your commander is a specific creature" is good, but to boost bad commanders, I think it's better to simply make good cards for the same characters instead of requiring people to run a bad card as commander.

IIW: New uncommons from your favorite set

Loreseed Nurturer 2G
Creature — Dryad (R)
Hexproof
When Loreseed Nurturer dies, you may exile it. If you do, return a card at random from your graveyard to your hand.
2/2

IIW: +1/+1 counter keywords

Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, put a verse counter on Nourishing Aria. GG , Sacrifice Nourishing Aria: Search your library for a creature card with converted mana cost X or less, where X is the number of verse counters on Nourishing Aria, and put it onto the battlefi...

no time for crits tonight, here's a t3:
1. slimytrout
2. Raptorchan
3. Ink-Treader