frogchild wrote: ↑4 years ago
Ehlkar, Traitor To Bant WW
Legendary Creature - Human Coward
1B, T: Draw a card and you lose one life. Activate this ability only if you control a Swamp
1R, T: Deal 2 damage to any target. Activate this ability only if you control a Mountain
Fear drives even the most loyal to evil
1/2
The card is fine but only two words: missing rarity. Full stops are also missing at the end of both activated abilities and the flavor text, but the big thing is rarity. I can't vote for a card that's missing rarity, I'm sorry.
RaikouRider wrote: ↑4 years ago
Ainok Ambush 2G
Instant {U}
Target creature you control gains deathtouch until end of turn if
B was spent to cast this spell, and gains indestructible until end of turn if
W was spent to cast this spell. Then that creature fights up to one target creature you don't control.
I like this card both mechanically and flavorfully. Ainok and leonin are probably my favorite races in MTG. Very nice and functional design.
Jimmy Groove wrote: ↑4 years ago
Crowd Out 2U
Instant (U)
Create a 1/1 green Elf creature token if
G was spent to cast this spell and/or a 1/1 red Goblin creature token if
R was spent to cast this spell, then counter target spell unless it's controller pays
1 for each creature you control.
"You trying getting a word in edgewise,"
No, I can't believe it! I don't play for a few months and as soon as I'm back, it's also back: the verb it's vs. the possessive its. Here it's the wrong one. I also have trouble understanding the flavor text. It feels like some word is missing or something like that.
slimytrout wrote: ↑4 years ago
Empire's Erasure 3BB
Sorcery (R)
Kicker
{g/w}{g/w}
Destroy all creatures. If this spell was kicked, destroy all nonland permanents instead.
"A thousand years, or a thousand thousand, seemed to pass in an instant, until the mage lowered his hands and the greatest city known to man was nothing more than a pile of dust."
-Saretora, wandering historian
This is genius. "Destroy target/all nonland permanent(s)" is not monocolor but either WB or GB, and B can destroy all creatures. A perfect mixing of those different pieces. The flavor text is also very good.
marioguy3 wrote: ↑4 years ago
Jeskai Art Maker
Creature - Human (Rare)
Defender
,
: Create a 1/1 red artifact servo creature token.
,
: Target servo you control becomes a 5/5 and is blue in addition to its other colors and types.
2/2
Servo is a creature type and thus should be capitalized. No problems with the design.
void_nothing wrote: ↑4 years ago
Monster of the Marang 4B
Creature - Frog Horror
(U)
Flash
2G: Target creature gains deathtouch until end of turn.
2U: Untap target creature.
The mere possibility of its presence puts Sultai patrols on alert.
3/3
Another perfect card with no mistakes and a good design. My only remark is that the abilities feel a little bit disconnected to me, but I see how they can be useful together in combat. Good work.
kwanyeegor-ii wrote: ↑4 years ago
Condfident Krumar
3B
Creature--Orc Warrior (Uncommon)
Whenever Confident Krumar attacks, put a +1/+1 counter on it if you control two or more Forests and you gain 4 life if you control two or more Plains.
2/2
I don't think we need to talk about formatting. It's a long story by now. I'd never vote for a card with such formatting mistakes, always the same by the way, even if it were the best card in the world. I'm tired of pointing out the specific mistakes, you should know them by now.