Subject16: Stensian Lich -
Liliana, Untouched by Death's -3 meets
Kragma Warcaller -- fun concept. Unfortunately, I think it would be very confusing to players, since I believe it wouldn't actually work as intended: when you cast the zombies from your graveyard, they go on the stack, so they're not actually entering from the graveyard. Only things like
Prized Amalgam would trigger the second ability.
bravelion83: Ruthless Lymphsucker - The flavor text is a bit overlong and forced -- the card ends up almost having microtext because it has six lines of flavor. The concept itself is quite interesting though, even if I suspect it would lead to unfun play patterns: if it's a set with +1/+1 counter themes (as I imagine it would be if this card were included), then players wouldn't want to play their cool cards into this for fear of having the counters stolen.
Legend: Cyclopean Mass - Unusual formatting, but nbd.
Really not sure I understand the flavor though. It's a Zombie Elemental, which makes me think that it's some kind of giant collection of dead matter -- but it's cyclopean, so it's got one giant eye? Also why isn't it a Cyclops? And why does it make things into swamps? As for the card itself, it's definitely unusual and has some memory issues (should probably employ counters of some kind to make it easier to track the affected lands), but otherwise works.
EDIT: Flavor explained - wasn't familiar enough with the older cards to get the reference. Still think the card is a bit confusing though, both because of the lack of counters and because of the ambiguity in the final sentence.
marioguy3: Barabar, Human Bloodseeker - Name is kinda confusing: is he a human himself (but then why is he a zombie skeleton?) or is he seeking human blood (probably this one, but that's not really how English works)? Otherwise fine, although a little on the weak side and needs a rarity.
netn10: Thoughts Cleanser - Yeah, white can't do this. It could prevent the player from casting those two spells until end of turn, but it can't exile them - hand interaction is nowhere close to it's color pie. In fact, only black could do this, which is why all specters so far have been black.
Raptorchan: Spooky Visitor - Love it. Definitely a card that's either amazing or unplayable depending on whether you have curses in your deck, but the flavor is great.
1: Raptorchan
2: bravelion83
3: marioguy3