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Post by SmashPortal » 5 years ago

I've changed the mana cost since receiving feedback from reddit. As I said in a comment on that post, the original version was basically Narset's Reversal (pre-War of the Spark).

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Return target spell to its owner's hand.
Addendum -- If you cast this spell during your main phase, exile that spell instead.
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Edit 1: Updated mana cost to reflect feedback (from {W/U}U to WU)
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Post by void_nothing » 5 years ago

Nothing wrong with that effect for two mana - the addendum here is pretty marginal but good as a counterspell hoser - but that mana cost is aesthetically jarring. Something about hybrid mana next to one of the mana symbols the hybrid symbol contains is out-of-balance and ugly. A lot of people don't even think costs like Thopter Foundry's look good. If you're going to include white this card should cost WU.
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Post by SmashPortal » 5 years ago

I agree with your analysis and have updated the card's mana cost. I think I was mentally stuck on the effect hybrid mana has on the card frame, making it multicolored instead of gold.
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