Found time to make the changes and here's what I got: Mercenary's Respite [sym=3][sym=u][sym=r] Enchantment (R) Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player, you may gain control of target land they control until end of turn. Untap that land. Whenever you tap a land you control b...

Hey Pygyzy thanks for the comments, maybe you'd like to prove me wrong on Pykon and make a deck that really breaks his untap ability? Because I really am not convinced. Sure. It'll be an abridged version but should get the point across. Commander 1x Pykon Lands 1x Breeding Pool 1x Ketria Triome 1x ...

Pith, The Cranky 1WRG Legendary Creature - Dragon Child Foodfight (Fight damage dealt by creatures you control also causes you to create that many Food tokens.) Whenever you're attacked, you may have any number of target creatures you control each fight another target attacking creature. T : Creatur...

Challenge accepted, StonerOfKruphix , here goes the whole cycle! I see them as five overlords of a plane, fighting for subjects. Iopadi, Diamond Magistrate 4W Legendary Creature — Dragon (R) Flying Whenever you spend WUBRG , you gain 5 life. 4W : Prevent the next 5 damage that would be dealt to any...

Snow bird - Love anything with this type of effect. Wish it was snow but I understand why it's not. Rise in rage - I need this for my Marchesa deck right now. 2 mana seems a bit low. 3 seems more right to me. Also has red ever gotten a mass +1/+1 pump like this? Seems more white or green. I guess th...

Thank you both that was all really helpful. I'm going to use your feedback and make the changes. If you look in the custom sets I have some cards that'll elucidate better what I'm trying to do with these. To your points, Pith - Will dekeyword except fruit fight. Fruitfight was food fight originally ...

--- Card of the Day 2020-05-11 > Chill Conduit {1}{B} Snow Creature – Human Cleric (R) If you would add mana from a snow source, you lose 1 life and add an additional {B} instead. The bargain struck with the grey lord is sealed by offering a town member. They return soon after, transformed, oversee...

Pith, The Cranky WRG Legendary Creature - Elder Dragon Wurm Child Flapping (This creature can't be blocked except by creatures with flying or reach if you flapped your arms like a bird this turn.) Napping (When you're attacked, you may have Pith fight target attacking creature.) Fruitfight (Fight da...

Ok, that looks good but "rather than cast" doesn't actually work because you are, in fact, casting the spell. You are putting it on the stack choosing modes and targets and paying costs; so you are casting the spell. I think you want "Rather than choosing which part of this card to c...

Pain RR //Torture BB Sorcery Superimposition (This card is colorless except as it's resolving. Cast this spell only if you can cast both halves. Rather than cast this spell, shuffle a mountain and a swamp on the battlefield, face down. An opponent chooses one. Reveal it. If a Mountain is revealed, s...

I think faeries might be interesting. Innistrad was gothic horror but a more urban fantasy similar to underworld or lost girl and such would be cool

Would be neat if they had an ultimate that was both. If the text box has room for it. Currently I assume I can have either reminder text or a fifth (!) ability and that only if I keep it short and sweet. I opted to go instead with a path of resilience and value. I consider them more in line with th...

Perfect//Timing's guessing game will literally never fail for the caster. If they want Perfect, they will get perfect. If they want Timing, they will get Timing. Since, you know, it is exceptionally easy to just swap the cards behind your back after your opponent chooses a hand so you can always re...

Arha, Promised to the Void WUB Creature - Human Cleric Sacrifice a permanent: You lose 1 life. 3/3 Definitely RWB card. I love this and would build a deck for it. Needs to be a vampire. I wish it had one more line "At the end of each turn, if you lost 5 or more life this turn, discard your han...

If the goal was just "a card that you don't know what version you're getting each time you cast it" is the goal look at more actually out there effects that are only usable in unsets such as the scratch-off cards they attempted for unglued 2. A more reasonable version of such effects is s...

Good card but lands with a bunch of counters building up is annoying to me. IMO. I'd prefer, "... if ~ doesn't have a currency counter on it...". The counters may be annoying to you, but how annoying is it to always have to sequence your creatures to enter the battlefield after you use th...

The very first problem is it took three reads before I understood what was going on at all. This is absurdly complex for what seems absolutely no gain the fact that when written out you use left hand and right hand and then define the text as left side and right side is a nightmare. The second prob...

Card of the Day 2020-05-07 > Caravan Station Land – Desert Market (R) Whenever a creature enters the battlefield under your control, put a currency counter on ~. {T} : Add {C} . {T} , Remove a currency counter from ~: Add one mana of a color of your choice. Good card but lands with a bunch of count...

Perfect 1UU //Timing 1RR Instant (This spell is either side but not both. It's colorless except when it's not.) Superimposition — As you announce this spell, before costs are paid, hide two untapped Islands you control and two untapped Mountains you control behind your back, two in each hand. An opp...

Okay so this card is obviously UN but it does make me wonder if the rules would support a spell that could have different modes or costs before you've paid its mana cost. I made this card as a Un version of a modal spell/split card as a joke but the idea is interesting. Yes it could be done as any o...

Ok, so, first off, I am not one-hundred percent sure this is the right place to put this, but it is my best guess. OK, long story short, I am making a set based around tribes in the wedges. As of now, I have: Mardu Vampires Temur Werewolves Abzan Humans Sultai Zombies I have no idea what to put the...

Card of the Day 2020-05-06 > Poisoned Beverage {1}{B} Instant (C) Target player loses 3 life. If that player has gained life this turn, they lose an additional 3 life. Spring water? From what spring? Great sideboard card against life gain deck. It's doesn't feel super black tho, feels like a red ca...

Do Without 2W Sorcery Each player chooses a nonland permanent they control. You may say, "Duck." or "Goose.". If you say duck, each player chooses another nonland permanent they control they haven't already chosen this way. Repeat this until you say, "Goose." or a playe...

Confessor X XBRG Legendary Creature — Ass Skeleton Missionary Confessor X ETB with X verse counters on him. All X's are equal to the number of verse counters on Confessor. X costs cost 0 instead of X. "Tell me again what you just said but the way I told you." 3+X/3+X Codename Major Ass XB...

Card of the Day 2020-05-05 > Trolley Problem {B}{R} Sorcery (R) Target nonland permanent's controller sacrifices it unless they sacrifice three other permanents. Love it. Perfect as is and feels very Hellfire of Torment or Choice of Damnations. 2 cards I love. Would love to see something similar li...