grammer and wording help pls
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2019 3:02 pm
Temple of Last Farewells
Enchantment — Aura [R]
Enchant Island or Plains
Enchanted land has ": when target creature you control dies this turn, return that card to the battlefield under your control, except it's an Illusion in addition to its other types and it has "When this creature becomes the target of a spell or ability, sacrifice it.""
The gift of closure in the midst of grief.
It has double quotation marks within quotation marks which is messy. Any help on rewording or grammar appreciated.
I used text from adarkar valkyrie, phantasmal image and an enchant land with a tap ability.
P.S, It's for the MCC and text must include "dies" or "is put into the battlefield".
Cheers
Enchantment — Aura [R]
Enchant Island or Plains
Enchanted land has ": when target creature you control dies this turn, return that card to the battlefield under your control, except it's an Illusion in addition to its other types and it has "When this creature becomes the target of a spell or ability, sacrifice it.""
The gift of closure in the midst of grief.
It has double quotation marks within quotation marks which is messy. Any help on rewording or grammar appreciated.
I used text from adarkar valkyrie, phantasmal image and an enchant land with a tap ability.
P.S, It's for the MCC and text must include "dies" or "is put into the battlefield".
Cheers