September CCL, Signups/Round 2: Blade and Panoply

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Post by Lorn Asbord Schutta » 3 years ago

CCL September Signups/Round 2

"Blade and Panoply"
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Welcome to the Card Creation League! Everyone is free to participate in either or both of the first two rounds. Come join us!

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It's Knight Month here in the CCL! We will focus on more realistic approach to these type of warriors and on some of the diffrences that put them apart from the other fighters.

Warriors live and die by their equipment, both offensive and protective. The knights were no diffrent, yet they could be easily distniguishable from the other soldiers of medieval period. There few reasons.
The first were honor and customs. For instance at some point in second half of middle ages ranged weapons - both shot and thrown - became frowned upon by knights as not suited for them, yet in some older poems like La Chanson de Roland we can see remnants of archery being associated with knights. Likewise, the iconic longsword and whole familiy of swords become wildly associated with nobility and military commandership in medieval period no less, a tradition still followed up to this day in some armies.
The other one was simply money. As a landowners in feudal structures, knights were able to reap profits from taxes and use them to buy a higher quality equipment then the more common folk. What the "higher quality" meant changed with time, as more productions methods were discovered and more steel and iron flooded the market, yet you would not see a drafted soldier in plate armour.
Finally, most of knights had some kind of insignia when going to battle. It allowed both quicker recognision of foe and friend, especially since the crest had varied shapes based on land of lineage origin (there were german, frankish and many diffrent variations). Moreover, the emblem signified the importance of warrior and a possibility - as they were land- and goodwners - for a ransom, which was a popular back then.


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Design a an Equipment artifact that mentions a Knight type in its rules text.
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Anyone can enter this first round! Your submissions are due Wednesday September 16th, 12:00 EST.
  • Round 1 — Open to Everyone (September 1st–9th)
  • Round 2 — Open to Everyone (September 9th–16th)
  • Rounds 1 and 2 Critiques (Due September 19th)
  • Top 8 — Open to top 8 finishers (September 19th–23st)
  • Top 8 Critiques (Due September 25rd)
  • Top 4 — Open to top 4 finishers (September 25th–29th)
  • Top 4 Critiques (Due September 31th)
  • Final (September, winner determined by public poll)
Please note: For this month we will continue asking first and second round contestants to evaluate seven other contestants during the critique and top 3 period, in order to increase the total number of evaluations each contestant gets.
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Post by void_nothing » 3 years ago

Sigiled Sword of Jhess 3
Artifact - Equipment (R)
Equipped creature gets +2/+0, has first strike, and is a Knight in addition to its other types.
Whenever equipped creature attacks, you may discard a card. If you do, scry 1, then draw a card. If you don't, create a Treasure token.
Equip 3
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Post by slimytrout » 3 years ago

Irvenar, Forged for Glory 1RW
Legendary Artifact - Equipment (R)
Equipped creature has double strike, lifelink, and haste and attacks each combat if able.
Whenever equipped creature dies, exile it, then you may attach Irvenar, Forged for Glory to target tapped creature you control. If there are four or more Knights exiled with Irvenar, you win the game.
Equip 2
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Post by jamblock » 3 years ago

Magnetic Sigil 1W
Artifact - Equipment (R)
Whenever a Knight enters the battlefield under your control, you may attach any number of Equipment you control with total converted mana cost less than or equal to that creature's converted mana cost to that creature.
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each Equipment attached to it and has vigilance.
Equip 4

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Post by netn10 » 3 years ago

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Seeker of True Hearts 4RW
Artifact - Equipment (Mythic)
When Seeker of True Hearts enters the battlefield, search your library for a Knight creature card, put it onto the battlefield, then attach Seeker of True Hearts to it.
Equipped creature gets +2/+2 and has vigilance and haste.
Equip 2

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Post by Phyrexian Editor » 3 years ago

Heirloom Armor 2
Artifact — Equipment {U}
Eqiupped creature gets +1/+1. It has vigilance if it's a Knight.
Sacrifice Heirloom Armor: Create two Treasure tokens. (They're artifacts with "Tap, Sacrifice this artifact: Add one mana of any color.")
Equip 1
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Post by RaikouRider » 3 years ago

Fiendcleaver 1WW
Legendary Artifact - Equipment {M}
Equipped creature gets +3/+3 and has protection from nonwhite.
Whenever equipped creature attacks or blocks, if it isn't a Knight, exile equipped creature at end of combat.
Equip 2

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Post by Henlock » 3 years ago

Sword of Accolades 1ww
Artifact - Equipment (r)
When Sword of Accolades enters the battlefield, you may put a Knight card with converted mana cost 3 or less from your hand onto the battlefield. If you do, attach Sword of Accolades to that creature.
Equipped creature has +2/+1 and protection from legendary.
Equip 1w

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Post by kwanyeegor-ii » 3 years ago

Shimmer Shield 2
Artifact--Equipment (Uncommon)
Equipped creature gets +0/+4. It has hexproof if it's a Knight.
2: Equip Shimmer Shield to target Knight creature you control. Untap that creature.
Equip 1
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Banner of the Black Rose 3
Artifact — Equipment (Rare)
When Banner of the Black Rose enters the battlefield, if you're the monarch, attach it to target creature you control. Otherwise, you become the monarch.
Equipped creature gets +2/+2, and has vigilance and haste.
At the beginning of your upkeep, if Spectral Crown is attached to a creature and you're the monarch, create a 2/2 white Knight creature token with vigilance.
Equip 3

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Post by MonoRedMage » 3 years ago

Fool's Motley 1R
Artifact - Equipment {U}
Spells you cast that target equipped creature cost 3 less to cast.
Equipped creature can't be blocked except by Knights.
Equip 2

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Post by Raptorchan » 3 years ago

Komtur's Sigil 1w
Artifact - Equipment (R)
Komtur's Sigil enters the battlefield with a charge counter on it.
Equipped creature gets +1/+1 for each charge counter on Komtur's Sigil, has vigilance and is a Knight in addition to its other types.
When equipped creature dies, put a charge counter on Komtur's Sigil.
Equip 1

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Post by Lorn Asbord Schutta » 3 years ago

And the round is closed.
Please provide critiques and top 3 for seven contestants above you, looping if neccessary.

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slimytrout
jamblock
netn10
Phyrexian Editor
RaikouRider
Henlock
kwanyeegor-ii
Subject16
MonoRedMage
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Post by void_nothing » 3 years ago

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Phyrexian Editor - This is very resonant flavorfully and could very much be a Core Set card. Not much to say about it otherwise as it doesn't do that much new mechanically.

RaikouRider - That broad-spectrum of a protection ability is incredibly strong but the drawback for non-Knights is also brutal. Feels suitably epic though.

Henlock - I'm almost certain that ETB ability is too powerful, particularly if your Knight has double strike. Great idea making an actual knighting sword though.

kwanyeegor-ii - I'm shocked this is the only shield in the round. It really seems like an obvious concept. This card is generally useful but might be trying to do too much for Knights.

Subject16 - Looks like you changed the name midway through the design. Kind of feels like it should be legendary, and doesn't necessarily feel like a card meant for Brago OR for Marchesa.

MonoRedMage - Ah, now that IS different flavor. I'm not sure how being a jester relates to spell discounts though.

Raptorchan - There have been similar cards before but this card being a way to pass on the title of knight-commander works very well mechanically and flavorfully.
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Post by MonoRedMage » 3 years ago

jamblock - Not a fan of the name but I really like this one mechanically. Equipment decks always have the problem of having multiple parts needed to be effective and this basically reduces the number of parts by removing equip costs.

netn10 - This could be unbelievably strong depending on the available Knights but six mana is a sorta steep cost and with the Titans as a baseline for 6 mana mythics, well... it should be strong lol.

Phyrexian Editor - Neat! You can sell the armor, huh? This has good resonance.

RaikouRider - I feel like protection from whole decks on a Knight with this would take over the game too easily.

Henlock - This has good flavor but it might be too complicated.

kwanyeegor-ii - Nice, this is pretty good protection.

Subject16 - Maybe this does too much but I like it a lot nevertheless.

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Ah, a call back to Sigiled Sword of Valeron that looks a lot like a Jousting Lance. A little odd to give it a rummage ability, since red is not actually in Bant, but otherwise a fun-looking card.
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Uh... it's just a Malefic Scythe with less flavorful counters, vigilance, and knight trinket text.
MonoRedMage
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The second ability has basically been done before on Prowler's Helm (although this is a fun reflavoring), but the first ability is the interesting one, although a bit odd because practically no pump spells have 3 or more in their cost.
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The flavor is a bit odd, especially since there was a bit of name confusion. It does seem like it would be a fun card, although definitely too strong -- no existing card allows you to become the monarch for less than four mana, which seems like a deliberate choice on R&D's part.
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A classic underpowered limited equipment, but still a good take on it.
Henlock
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Oooh, fun. Probably should be CMC 2 or less but I still love the idea.
RaikouRider
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Wow. Pretty rough drawback outside of a Knight deck, but absolutely busted in one -- outside the mirror match your creatures would basically just be little Progenituses. Still a cool idea though, although could use some flavor text.
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Post by kwanyeegor-ii » 3 years ago

Only time for top 3 this time...

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jamblock
netn10
Phyrexian Editor
RaikouRider
Henlock

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Post by Henlock » 3 years ago

Raptorchan: Too similar to the scythe to be exciting

voidnothing: Dub plus the option of treasures and looting, an apt combination of ramp and draw for colorless. May be a bit expensive.

sñimytrout: Really cool stuff. it wants yur creatures to die in combat and double strike might be a bit of a nonbo in that regard, but exciting alt win condition for Boros.

jamvlock: a nice and cheap autoequip option for knigh dec that wants your equipments to stack. Very nice with sigils of dintictions, o naginatas, bone saws, shadowspeara and such. . Nice with old time Flash knights.

netn10: Tjis is a great way to fetch important knights to.close the game. Haste is very important here as it has the imediate impact a 6 mana card should have

Phyrexian Editor: Simple and with some ramp/affinity utility. Great job.

Raikouraider: Severe drawback but +3/+3 and protection is very powerful. It doesn't come too xheap for knights.

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3. jamblock

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Post by Lorn Asbord Schutta » 3 years ago

Congratulations to top 8!

slimytrout
Raptorchan
Henlock
void_nothing
jamblock
Subject16
MonoRedMage
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