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Subject16: Setting aside the templating fixes... A
Paradox Haze static, with a +1 to
cheat the top card of your library (sped up by the static). Thankfully, free spells are never problematic. The -3 means you need to keep a Storm count with a Planeswalker that doesn't show any interest in a Storm count. The -7 emblem with an
auto trigger doubler can give you a third upkeep step, so that the +1 is ridiculous. The -3 doesn't fit with the other
Saffron Olive abilities.
slimytrout: Have it start with 2 loyalty and make the last ability -8/-9 if you're that concerned about the
Hellrider emblem, The +1 is deceptively strong, as only
two cards can grant haste and vigilance to your entire team, and the latter takes more effort. -X for
Blinding Flare works. Did you intend to only gain 1 life for your attack step with the emblem?
RaikouRider: Your +1 and emblem do not synergize very well, though the +1 puts
War Ajani's -2 to shame for PW decks. The -2 is fine, but sac a creature for
Contagion Engine's ETB would have been cleaner. "Sources you control have infect." That's all you need.
Ink-Treader: It's an EDH card for GU, because Simic needs more help since M20. Your -1 should read "Until your next turn, permanents you control have hexproof as long as they are untapped." Works like
Paradise Druid that way. As written, the permanents that are untapped when you activate the ability gain hexproof until your next turn, but the two you untap would not. Why is the emblem a 1 mana
Catch // Release (Izzet side) on a Simic card?
marioguy3: Bird matters PW, but the abilities are all low power. Getting token copies of the birds you control, or getting a
Dovescape emblem would have been more thematic.
Lorn Asbord Schutta: You can tap a tapped creature. If no opponent controls creatures, you can't activate any of your PWs abilities.
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For those comparing Illiya to
Sanguine Bond, you may not have noticed, but when you upshift from Uncommon to Rare, Sanguine Bond
costs 3 mana. Illiya replaces the lifegain, so the overall effect is weaker.
@slimytrout: Double power? Try blocking. Does Vito somehow triple a creature's power in your math, since you actually gain the life? Too good for 3 mana and Rare? This is nowhere near T3feri's level.
@RaikouRider: I think old, mostly forgotten Uncommon Enchantments as emblems aren't too pushed a concept.