Ink-Treader wrote: ↑2 years ago
Keeper of Evening Calm 3BB
Creature - Vampire Assassin (U)
Deathtouch, lifelink
When Keeper of Evening Calm enters the battlefield, it deals 1 damage to target creature an opponent controls.
"Nighttime should be quiet."
1/3
I like this card, it's very similar to mine actually, but I expected to see other cards playing in similar space. You were probably right to specify "an opponent controls", probably I should have done that too if I had thought of it.
Henlock wrote: ↑2 years ago
Monastery Torch r
Instant (c)
Monstery Torch deals 1 damage to any target.
Add
Monks handle fire like any other earthly need, with austerity and efficiency.
I love clean, simple cards, and designing such commons is very difficult. Very good job. Missing a full stop after "Add
R".
kwanyeegor-ii wrote: ↑2 years ago
Swarm of Windwasps 3GG
Creature - Elemental Insect (Uncommon)
Flying
Whenever Swarm of Windwasps attacks or blocks, it deals 1 damage to target creature with flying and 1 damage to that creature's controller.
When Swarm of Windwasps dies, create three 1/1 green Elemental Insect creature tokens with flying.
3/3
"1 damage to that creature's controller" is not green. This card should have been red-green because of that. It also doesn't feel right for green to have flying and create tokens with flying. Neither red actually. Probably this card would have needed a third color too.
MonoRedMage wrote: ↑2 years ago
Tinderbox Boggart R
Creature - Goblin Shaman {U}
When Tinderbox Boggart enters the battlefield, it deals 1 damage to target player or planeswalker.
1R: Tinderbox Boggart gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
1R: Target creature can't block Tinderbox Boggart this turn.
1/1
I like this. The costs look right to me. I haven't got much else to say about this card.
RaikouRider wrote: ↑2 years ago
Kumano, the Thousand Embers 1RR
Legendary Creature - Human Shaman {R}
Whenever a source you control deals exactly 1 damage to a permanent or player, put an ember counter on Kumano, the Thousand Embers.
If a creature or planeswalker dealt damage by Kumano this turn would die, exile it instead.
T: Kumano deals 1 damage to any target.
T, Remove X ember counters from Kumano: Kumano deals X damage to any target. Activate only as a sorcery.
1/4
Every single ability is in color and relatively easy to understand but the result is too complex in my opinion. Caring about dealing "exactly 1 damage" feels original though.
marioguy3 wrote: ↑2 years ago
Lanebasher
Creature - Orc (Uncommon)
: Lanebasher deals 1 damage to any target. Activate this ability only if an opponent drew two or more cards this turn.
Exile three cards from your graveyard: Lanebasher gains indestructible until end of turn.
2/1
Gaining indestructible is not red. Activating the damage ability only if an opponent drew at least two cards this turn feels right in red instead, as an enemy of blue, the drawing color. I'm also not sure red would get a one-mana 2/1 with additional upside.
Lorn Asbord Schutta wrote: ↑2 years ago
Flagellum Assisstant
Creature - Thrull (R)
As long as it your turn, Flagellum Assistant has lifelink and your other creatures get +1/+0.
Whenever a creature becomes tapped, Falgellum Assisstant deals 1 damage to it.
"The whip's crack inspires fear or fervor, depending on person. The Syndicate doesn't complain with either."
-Milana, Orzhov prelate
2/1
"Your other creatures" should be "other creatures you control". The triggered ability has a white trigger, and I think the effect is supposed to be the black part. It still feels more red to me than black. The flavor justifies it, but we know you could justify almost everything, even color pie breaks, with flavor. Ironically, in "fear or fervor", "fear" is black, no doubt about it, but "fervor" also sounds red to me. I think this card should have been Boros or possibly Mardu.