Vaevictis Asmadi, the Dire (sorry, I can't see the card in your deck, must have a typo)
I would cut
Crystal Ball and Darksteel Pendant. They are pretty bad. I like
Cream of the Crop a lot more.
Fires of Yavimaya is not that great. I like
Rhythm of the Wild a lot more. That way any creature you get off your commander's attack trigger get's a +1/+1 counter on it.
Usually when people go with all permanents they will do something like
Possibility Storm and DFCs / Adventure cards so that in the deck they are permanents but you can cast as an instant/sorcery. The typical idea is to cast a sorcery and have that Possibility Storm into
Primal Surge. You could also do
In Garruk's Wake or
Rise of the Dark Realms. Probably some options from Strixhaven that are creatures on the front and spells on the back would be really good regardless.
Murderous Rider // Swift End is a great card for an all permanents deck.
I just also like Possibility storm with top of the library manipulation.
The biggest issue with all permanents is removal. If you stick to all permanents, I recommend
Noxious Gearhulk,
Ravenous Chupacabra,
Karn Liberated (or other planeswalkers that can kill things) and
Binding the Old Gods. And more.
Now, if you decide to cut back on the all permanents plan, you want to look at the best instants and sorceries you can play. I recommend:
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Beast Within
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Heroic Intervention
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Assassin's Trophy
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Bedevil
You may also consider Card Draw, Ramp, and mass removal
Damnation, etc.
But obviously you risk playing too many spells and making your commander less strong.