What is the advice that you're seeking?
(Edit: Looks like the OP deleted their post above mine.)
Re: I need advice for my set!!!
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spacemonaut Bauble reclaimer
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A few things first:
It is probably best to explain what you want the cards to do or what advice you are seeking. The first card, for example, seems very strange due to the wording you have on it.
And this site has really good Custom Card Creation BBCode. I suggest you look into that to make things like this a bit easier to parse. As an example, here is your first card using the built-in BBCode:
if a player would tap a land, add a additional 2 mana for every color that land could produce.
if mana would empty from a player's mana pool, ~ deals X damage to you, were X is the amount of mana emptied.
at the beginning of a player's endstep, ~ deals 3 damage to that player for each untapped land you control.
(Notice I didn't bother rewording your text or trying to make it look any better but you can do that on your other cards)
It is probably best to explain what you want the cards to do or what advice you are seeking. The first card, for example, seems very strange due to the wording you have on it.
And this site has really good Custom Card Creation BBCode. I suggest you look into that to make things like this a bit easier to parse. As an example, here is your first card using the built-in BBCode:
The Surface's Curse
5
Enchantment
if a player would tap a land, add a additional 2 mana for every color that land could produce.
if mana would empty from a player's mana pool, ~ deals X damage to you, were X is the amount of mana emptied.
at the beginning of a player's endstep, ~ deals 3 damage to that player for each untapped land you control.
"all living things migrated underground, establishing new hierarchies..."
(Notice I didn't bother rewording your text or trying to make it look any better but you can do that on your other cards)
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void_nothing Look On My Sash...
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Copy-paste spammer stealing content from elsewhere in this board. Carry on.
Psst, check the second page of Custom Card Contests & Games! Because of the daily contests, a lot of games fall down to there.
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The greatest (fake) pro wrestling on the internet - Collaborative Create-A-Booster - My random creations (updated regularly)
Important Facts: Colorless is not a color, Wastes is not a land type, Changeling is not a creature type